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Capstone Proofread Help
#1
Can someone proofread my draft for chapter 1 of my capstone and offer input? Attached is the file. Thank you.


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TESU: 3 SH GPA: 4.00 | BALS & ASNSM in CS, Math
Excelsior: 18 SH GPA: 4.00 | AAS Tech Studies (Electronic/Instrumentation Technologies) High Honors GPA: 3.79

CTC: 3 SH GPA: 4.00
CHC: ENGU100-A; MATHU203-B; CMSCU210-B; CITU260-A; CITU190-A
CCP: 49 SH GPA: 3.88 (4 Courses In Progress) Phi Theta Kappa
TU: 12 SH GPA: 3.91
San Diego CC: 1 SH

CLEP: Anlys & Intprt Lit-60; Comp Mod-57; Info Sys & Comp App-53; Math-50; Mrkting-55
DSST: Computing-423; Supervision-410; Business-415; Tech Writing-51

Study: 21 SH || Institute: 2 SH || TEEX: 4 SH || Sophia: 2 SH || Coursera: 1 Course
Cert: Computer Operator (Department of Labor) / ICDL_US
Mil (Elec Tech): 88 LL / 18 UL
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#2
(01-13-2019, 03:10 PM)MrBossmanJr Wrote: Can someone proofread my draft for chapter 1 of my capstone and offer input? Attached is the file. Thank you.

Hey! It's Meghan from your class :Smile

I didn't have much of a chance to read your intro (I am still working on mine, myself!), but I did notice some formatting issues with your title page. I am also not sure if we need to do a running head for this page, but I found this youtube vid useful in figuring out all that formatting stuff. 

What I did read sounds great, though!!

https://youtu.be/VKWKswH29kM
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#3
Hey! Thanks, I forgot about the page numbers. I got rid of them by accident. Fixed it and added a running header.

I based my introduction off of the sample paper he gave us. Hopefully it will meet his requirements. I just want to pass and call it one. I start my other courses tomorrow so I'm worried if I can keep up.
TESU: 3 SH GPA: 4.00 | BALS & ASNSM in CS, Math
Excelsior: 18 SH GPA: 4.00 | AAS Tech Studies (Electronic/Instrumentation Technologies) High Honors GPA: 3.79

CTC: 3 SH GPA: 4.00
CHC: ENGU100-A; MATHU203-B; CMSCU210-B; CITU260-A; CITU190-A
CCP: 49 SH GPA: 3.88 (4 Courses In Progress) Phi Theta Kappa
TU: 12 SH GPA: 3.91
San Diego CC: 1 SH

CLEP: Anlys & Intprt Lit-60; Comp Mod-57; Info Sys & Comp App-53; Math-50; Mrkting-55
DSST: Computing-423; Supervision-410; Business-415; Tech Writing-51

Study: 21 SH || Institute: 2 SH || TEEX: 4 SH || Sophia: 2 SH || Coursera: 1 Course
Cert: Computer Operator (Department of Labor) / ICDL_US
Mil (Elec Tech): 88 LL / 18 UL
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#4
Is there some kind of rubric that you refer to when completing each assignment or is the e-book and an example essay all there is to refer to?
TESU BALS: Started Aug. 2018
Complete, Graduation June 2019 (awaiting conferral)
Completed:
TESU: LIB Capstone 3cr, Cornerstone 1cr 
Aleks: 3cr, Insurance Institute: 2cr NFA: 1cr 
Sophia: 2cr Straighterline: 48cr TEEX: 6cr 
Study.com: 18cr B&M: 77cr
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#5
Hmm, I think there is a rubric, but I didn't do my paper based on it. I worked with the sample the professor gave the class. I will look into it if you want.

The discussion posts have a rubric.
TESU: 3 SH GPA: 4.00 | BALS & ASNSM in CS, Math
Excelsior: 18 SH GPA: 4.00 | AAS Tech Studies (Electronic/Instrumentation Technologies) High Honors GPA: 3.79

CTC: 3 SH GPA: 4.00
CHC: ENGU100-A; MATHU203-B; CMSCU210-B; CITU260-A; CITU190-A
CCP: 49 SH GPA: 3.88 (4 Courses In Progress) Phi Theta Kappa
TU: 12 SH GPA: 3.91
San Diego CC: 1 SH

CLEP: Anlys & Intprt Lit-60; Comp Mod-57; Info Sys & Comp App-53; Math-50; Mrkting-55
DSST: Computing-423; Supervision-410; Business-415; Tech Writing-51

Study: 21 SH || Institute: 2 SH || TEEX: 4 SH || Sophia: 2 SH || Coursera: 1 Course
Cert: Computer Operator (Department of Labor) / ICDL_US
Mil (Elec Tech): 88 LL / 18 UL
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#6
Ah, just curious since I remember seeing something about a grading rubric, so just wondering how we structure everything based on that or just base it solely on the information in the e-book.

I start the course next month and dreading starting it.
TESU BALS: Started Aug. 2018
Complete, Graduation June 2019 (awaiting conferral)
Completed:
TESU: LIB Capstone 3cr, Cornerstone 1cr 
Aleks: 3cr, Insurance Institute: 2cr NFA: 1cr 
Sophia: 2cr Straighterline: 48cr TEEX: 6cr 
Study.com: 18cr B&M: 77cr
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